Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Comic 649: Do Me Without A Condom*
To be completely honest with you guys, I was pretty nervous about doing an entire guest week. Everyone seemed pretty excited about it, and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to live up to the hype. In my mind, the worst thing that could possibly happen was that Randall would put out a week of mediocre strips-- not hit it out of the park excellent, but not blatantly terrible, either. Well, it looks like I don't have to worry about that today, because this strip is freaking RIPE with mockery potential.
The only positive thing about this comic is the fact that the pre-coital discussion we're witnessing is happening in the dark (though a 631 redux would have made my job that much easier.) Don't get me wrong, I like sex and pornography and naked people as much as the next sex-deprived nerd, and I'm sure the #xkcd-sucks regulars will attest to the fact that I have a pretty... erm, diverse image collection. But, seeing stick figures getting it on does mildly creep me out. Much like stumbling upon Care Bears Rule 34 hentai makes the average person squirm as they giggle, it's the combining of something typically innocent with something plainly adult that raises my hackles. There's also the fact that the guy stick in these strips tend to be interpreted as Randall's avatar, and I'd like to think only the most desperate of "gerds" want to see him getting frisky.
But I digress. If we had a bingo card full of xkcd archetypes, I think someone would be winning money today. You could ink off the following: sexkcd, unrealistic dialogue, reference for the sake of it, misunderstanding->HIJINKS ENSUE... if only Randall had managed to work in a reference to Numa Numa or something, we'd have the webcomic equivalent of a straight flush.
While rehashing popular themes does tend to make a strip predictable, it doesn't necessarily guarantee it to be terrible. However, in instances like today's strip, I'm compelled to believe Randall has some sort of Wheel of Fortune style spinner in his living room that he's been using to select random geeky things to base a comic on, then spends the rest of his time building the strip's events around it. Even viewing this as a typical "wild and crazy hijinks" style comic, the premise is still totally absurd. He wore a wrist strap to bed and a condom to install RAM? Essentially all Randall's done is swap each scenario's prophylactics. There's nothing clever about that, and aside from middle school "hehe, they're having SEX!" titillation, there's nothing funny about it, either. Setting up your protagonist to act like a moron for the sake of working anti-static bracelets into a strip does not comedy make.
If Randall really had his heart set on addressing the ESD strap as some sort of invincibility bracelet, there are a dozen better ways to do it than four black panels and stilted dialogue. Show someone wearing it while failing at a bunch of different things; for example, flubbing his presentation at a work meeting, smashing his face on the ground while skateboarding, getting slapped while talking to a girl at a bar, and so on. Or, if he were really hell-bent on incorporating sex somehow, he could have worked in a pun about how both wristbands and condoms mitigate the consequences of sudden, unwanted discharges, as one forum member quipped. Instead, the only thing this strip serves as is a vehicle for readers to pat themselves on the back for having used, or at least knowing about, anti-static bracelets. Don't believe me? Swap them out with anything else that boy-stick could have mistaken for "protection"-- shin guards, saran wrap, insect repellent, whatever. Doesn't the whole strip seem preposterous, and frankly, sort of pathetic? Well, as Mr. Munroe himself would say, Q.E.D., bitches.
*Thanks to Carl for the awesome title suggestion!
[late update from Carl: Guys, Kevin just e-mailed me this bash.org quote - with more than 1300 upvotes - that's totally the exact same thing do with it what you will.]
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So, what's an xkcd?
ReplyDeleteShut the fuck up, Donny.
ReplyDeleteSo what the hell DID he get fired from geek squad for? Did he wear the condom like a glove and change the RAM or something? Did he tear out the middle so that the sides work as an improvised bracelet? And how can she "see" if it's pitch dark?
ReplyDeletegrumble mumble grumble
Why haven't I seen your "erm, diverse image collection" ?
ReplyDeleteRight there, aloria. =D
ReplyDeleteA straight flush, in bingo?
ReplyDeleteStop mixing your metaphors, young lady.
Listen. That is how we roll down at the old folks home. Stop playa hatin'.
ReplyDeleteYeah, if you slide down the Bingo Pole to Gumdrop Mountain, you'll go directly to jail, without collecting any letters.
ReplyDelete"Swap them out with anything else that boy-stick could have mistaken for "protection"-- shin guards, saran wrap, insect repellent, whatever. Doesn't the whole strip seem preposterous, and frankly, sort of pathetic? Well, as Mr. Munroe himself would say, Q.E.D., bitches."
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aloria -- that sums it up beautifully.
He could have done something involving the anti-static band and a lightning storm, that has more potential for comedy
ReplyDeleteI think the most likely explanation of this strip is, Randall was running late (he posted at 12:10, instead of midnight) and in a hurry. So he did a comic with no art.
ReplyDeleteI've been there. It wasn't pretty.
All the rest of the problems with this strip--weird dialog, no real joke--would then stem from the fact that it was a rush job.
It took me a *long* time and a few re-reads to actually understand what was going on and who was saying what. And even when I came to the xkcdsucks entry on it, I realized that I hadn't understood it right.
ReplyDeletethe two (invisible) people in the comic switch sides between panels 2 and 3, very confusing
ReplyDelete@Comic JK
ReplyDeleteYour Spiderman comic:
http://comicjk.com/comic.php/3
Is a lot like my Spiderman comic:
http://stealmycomic.com/2008/02/19/spiderman/
Just sayin'
An astute observation, r. I'm shocked I missed that; it's the biggest crime this waste of a strip commits!
ReplyDeleteJK:
ReplyDelete"wireless-fireless". Pure win.
what do you expect when it's called "steal my comic"
ReplyDeletech00f, your comic is better.
ReplyDeleteJK, what the hell is the last line of your comic supposed to mean?
@Carl: The Spiderman one? In retrospect, the last line is a good example of following the punch line with an unneeded other line. Not to mention the art is terrible.
ReplyDeleteI have the excuse, though, that this was the third comic I'd ever drawn.
@Ch00f: You're right, you drew yours about six months before I drew mine. I promise I thought it was original at the time, though. My bad!
Also, @Lint of Death: Thanks for the compliment! I liked that one too, and I was surprised no one had thought of it first.
ReplyDeleteAt home, my personal LAN is named 'wireless'. Password...'fireless' :)
Add "lazy art" and "wall of text" to the bingo card. And possibly "unnecessary post-punchline dialogue" as well, depending on which part you consider to be the punchline (I think the fourth panel would be much better with the first speech bubble by itself, and the Geek Squad line as the alt-text.)
ReplyDeleteOkay, so, Comic JK, I just read the first hundred twenty or so of your comics, and I basically shat my lungs out with hatred. Quit it.
ReplyDelete@Femalethoth: I've already mentioned that Comic JK's entire creative being has its lips firmly wrapped around Randall's member. I'm pretty sure that if xkcd linked to his abortion he calls a webcomic
ReplyDelete@Comic JK: seriously dude, your stuff sucks for -stick figure art-, a least spring for Gimp or a pirated photoshop. Take the time to draw poses human beings would actually be in, spend longer than three minutes on a single comic since you're certainly not spending any time on the writing, do something! Your comic actually made me VOMIT IN AGONY
I love xkcds like this one because they make me horny. It always puts me in the mood to open up Paint, draw some schlongs (with the spray paint tool), and rub one out.
ReplyDeleteXkcdcouldbeworse:
ReplyDeleteLast line "I accidently maek babby, is bad?"
The point about swapping out the antistatic bracelet with any other form of protection is one of the best points I've seen made here.
ReplyDeleteooo damn aloria i love you and your post was spot-on
ReplyDeletei meant to leave that comment when i read your post but blogger decided to fuck my shit up and not load at all
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ReplyDeleteGuys which ones did I miss?
ReplyDeletefred is there a name for the "my hobby: being an asshole" category?
ReplyDeletealso "creepy," or would that fall into troubled romance?
ReplyDeleteNo idea, but if you suggest a good one I'll definitely add it.
ReplyDeleteCreepy could be troubled romance, but not necessarily, so it can be a seperate section. It's a bit vague, but I think I'll add it just because I still need a lot of filler.
ReplyDeletei actually think "my hobby: being an asshole" is pretty good as is. as you can tell, i am supremely creative
ReplyDeleteGood example of laziness... taking an initial idea and not really following through.
ReplyDelete"Unwanted discharges"... now that was actually funny.
There, I just called it "My hobby: being an asshole." I like the fact that it's next to the anus picture.
ReplyDeletealso: "Where's the joke?"
ReplyDeleteor is that too cruel and subjective
"Spiderman is nothing without skyscrapers" is hardly a novel idea.
ReplyDeleteThat being said, I've seen sprite comics better than comic JK. Honestly, sprite comics!
This comic was so godawful, what's funny is that there isn't even bad art, there's just simply no art. Yet another comic that could simply be some text on a blog post, or a series of twitter posts.
ReplyDeleteMakes for a good xkcdsucks post though. :3
+1 for unrealistic dialog.
ReplyDeleteI mean, why the hell would she actually say "Hang on, I can't see - did you put on a condom?"
It's DARK. He knows she can't see. It would have been so much simpler to just say "Did you put on a condom?" or, better, "Are you wearing a condom?" I mean, honestly...
+9000 for the bug spray comment.
Just updated the "gerds" with a link to what I am referring to-- I think it might have gotten spellchecked to "girls" the first time around.
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ReplyDeletealoria this is a good post and i have a suspicion that those who dislike your posts might be secretly gay (they dislike girls because they are secretly gay)
ReplyDeleteIf there is a succinct way to phrase it, the bingo board needs a category of "let the audience imagine the wacky hijinks that Randall doesn't bother to come up with". Which this comic tries to have, except that there is clearly nothing wacky to imagine.
ReplyDeleteThis comic would work slightly better, though still terrible, if the female (or bottom male, it's all cool) was the one wearing the strap. You'd have to lose the mention of the condom, and instead use the Pill, but I think that would be an improvement.
Worded correctly, pill-->strap could sound as logical as, say, gum-->patch for quitting smoking.
And the alt-text cries out for a bad pun about "at least my computer didn't get a virus". And we would groan, but it would at least work.
Ken, you've got a good point with the Pill->strap thing. They do make birth control patches, so the idea of a birth control wristband isn't completely out there.
ReplyDeleteThere is actually NuvaRing, which is just a plastic ring impregnated with hormones that hangs out up by the cervix. I've seen them and they look a lot like those plastic jelly bracelets that were trendy back when Avril Lavigne was popular. But I'm glad Randall didn't go THAT route.
Thanks Ken, I'm gonna call it "scene missing".
ReplyDelete@Fred - I'd recommend calling it 'Noodle Incident'
ReplyDeleteThat's the primary reason I was so confused at the comic in regards to who's saying what (other than the position switch in the middle). I remember reading about a wristband (or some other strap-on going somewhere) as an alternative method to the pill. I couldn't understand what was going on because the male was actually the one with the wristband, something that makes no sense.
ReplyDeleteActually, I might be wrong on this, but I don't think the comic treats the characters' positions as "left and right", but instead as "top and bottom", and the left/right thing only refers to who speaks first. It baffles me that Randall, who has been fully dedicated to drawing comics for YEARS, can fuck up such a basic element of comics.
ReplyDeleteYep, that looks like it, Fernie. And I agree.
ReplyDeleteToday's XKCD is infinitely bland. At least there's no post-punchline dialogue--though the alt-text is basically Randall indulging his habit of explicitly spelling out the joke in the title-text.
ReplyDeleteTepid romance, asymmetric relationships, fantasizing about dinosaurs, redundant title-text. Pretty typical.
Get out of my head, Randall. Or at least stay in the funny parts!
ReplyDeleteAlso, is that woman-riding-a-sauropod sexual or WHAT? I mean, we're talking some serious Freudian imagery here. And this following a comic that implied the woman was on top...
ReplyDeleteAt least the art on the dinosaur is pretty good
ReplyDeleteHm, newest xkcd feels somewhat like the oldest ones. And the dinosaur looks cool.
ReplyDeleteAloria: I was the one who changed "girds" to "girls"! it was me all along. It seemed like a typo.
ReplyDeleteFred: 1) "My Hobby: Being an Asshole" was TOTALLY MY IDEA FIRST. and 2) You should make a space for White Knighting (see, for example, 322)
I hereby give all credit to Carl for "My Hobby: Being an Asshole". Also, White Knighting is a great idea, that's going in.
ReplyDeleteI might turn this into a thing where you can pass a bunch of numbers or something in the URL and it'll automatically mark the squares you specified.
sorry carl i forgot to credit you
ReplyDeletefred: what?
Urgh. The new strip. WHERE IS THE HUMOUR, Randall?... oh... yes, sure, mentioning dinosaurs is insta-funny.
ReplyDeleteMal summed it up well: "infinitely bland". No more, no less.
Not that I think the comic was great- the position swap kept me confused for a whole 5 minutes- but I got the impression it was the girl who got kicked out of geek squad for wearing a static bracelet which the geeks she worked with (and for) would have interpreted as using a contraceptive at the workplace...while having sex with noone... which is actually vaguely funny, if not for the fact that it took me 5 minutes to think of that...
ReplyDeleteChit: Except for the fact that Randall was clearly not thinking of this, your interpretation makes SO MUCH MORE SENSE.
ReplyDeleteThe last lines as spoken by him make no sense at all. People interpreted this as meaning that he was wearing a condom while changing RAM, because everyone figured "hey, it's the punchline, so there's GOT to be something funny, right? ...right...?" and invented their own punchline, but ther's certainly no evidence of THAT anywhere.
But if it were the GIRL saying "Wait... so what I was changing RAM the other day [and was wearing a wrist band] you thought... what...?" and the guy was like, "yeah! I THOUGHT that was weird" and then... well we're in a funnier place already. At that point maybe the geeksquad could have been shoe-horned in somehow.
I love how Comic JK is a member of this community even though the 2 comics of his strip I saw both had excess dialoge/panels after the punchline
ReplyDeleteOn the one hand, I'm curious what "diverse" means.
ReplyDeleteOn the other, I probably don't want to know...
Hey guys, do you know you suck as much as xkcd? Let me understand the stripe for you.
ReplyDeleteRandall did not wear a condom but his girlfriend's contraceptive wristband. He was kicked out after destroying a few $ks worth of RAM chips and processors.
Now his GF is wearing his anti-static band.
The punchline is that it is too late(no, actually there is no punchline)
the best part about anon 5:06 is he is clearly misinterpreting the strip
ReplyDeletehahaha, a whole blog for people jelious that they cant understand basic humor. awesome. so anyone taking the piss make better comics?
ReplyDeleteI write better microfiction all the time, and at a higher rate, at my blog. I could make a better comic but would rather wait until I had an artist to work with.
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